URGEN DOLMA
ESSAY ONE
ENG-101
In Excerpts from Economic and
Philosophic Manuscripts of 1844, Karl Marx describes the word alienation as a
separation that is correlated between the work and family. He shows how
alienation takes place in our daily life alienating from work and family. In
modern times, more and more people rely on "labor" to live and that
is, before people could rely in part on nature itself for its
"natural needs". If one wants to eat, one must work: it is only through money that
one may survive. Marx claims, "The more man puts into god, the less
he retains in himself. The worker puts his life into object; but now his life
no longer belongs to him but to the object." This shows how his life is
devoted to the work and all he is doing is for living and not such meaningful
life for himself which dragged into the world of alienation that apart one's
from their work and family. Thus, Marx points out "Labor is only used to
create more wealth, instead of achieving the fulfillment of human nature".
This supports that people generally work for money rather than thinking of
their own happiness in what they are doing and make themselves part of a
meaningless and unhappy life.
The
concept of alienation does apply to the Studs Terkel "Who Built The Pyramid
" by Mike Lefevre showing exact reason of alienation of work from his
life, and the unhappiness and tiredness of his living with the job that is
not satisfaction. However, "Blue Collar Brilliance" by Mike Rose
somehow shows that alienation is away from work on this chapter referring
work as their happiness and passion. In Studs Terkel "Who Built The
Pyramid", Mike Lefevre works as a steel worker in the steel mill and the
ridicule he receives for being a laborer. I believe his negative attitude
affects his credibility. Mike feels that he is treated like a slave and he
really has no purpose for doing something for himself. He also feels that he is
not appreciated for what he does like an artist or a movie star is. He
says that a computer can do his job for him. He is angered by that because
he feels that a computer does not need money to support a family or buy things
that are needed from day to day. Mike has an attitude about his job. He
feels that he should not get excited about what he is and
Levefre talks importantly about how he never sees the results of his
efforts. In a factory, as a result of the division of labor, each employee
has tiny tasks that are put into a final product completely alienated
from the workers themselves. All Lefevre can think about is his days off,
and he’s tired the rest of the time. This is the result of condition,
which is terrible for both the mind and body. Lefevre says, “I cannot
picture myself singing to a tractor. I just can't (Laughs.) Or singing to
steel.(Singsongs.) Oh whoop-de-doo, I'm at the bowdlerizer, oh how I love this
heavy steel. No thanks. Never happen." There is no hope to love his
job. Furthermore, the working hours restrict employees. Because of this they
cannot get time to spend with their family. Working hours are long,
the works is heavy and patrons usually treat their laborer in a bad
way without any tolerance. As a result of this, workers have alienation
towards their family.
On the
other hand, Mike Rose didn’t apply word alienation to “Blue Collar
Brilliance”. In the chapter “Blue Collar Brilliance", Mike Rose challenges
the view that intelligence can be measured by the amount of schooling a
person has completed. He suggests that blue-collar and service
jobs require more intelligence than meets the eye. He describes his
experiences growing up observing his mother as a waitress in coffee shops
and family restaurants. He shows his mother as a dynamic woman who
loved her job and put her heart and soul into being a waitress. He
described the way she memorized who ordered what, how long each dish is
supposed to take to prepare, and how she became a pro at interpreting
the emotional needs of her customers and colleagues alike. He also details
his uncles work at the General Motors factory and shows the amount of
intelligence that was required of him as he rose from being in
the production line to supervising paint jobs. He explains how he observed
different types of blue- collar and service workers in action, and came to
the conclusion that each of them have a skill that takes a lot of
mind power to master. Mike Rose observes that "Like anyone who is
effective at physical work, my mother learned to work smart, as she put
it, to make every move count". This shows how his mother devoted herself
into work without any sadness and dissatisfaction which means she is not
alienated from work instead she loved her job.
In conclusion, I
want to say that Mike Lefevre's life and Mike Rose's mother is the
best picture to show how working life turns people into robots, how it
changes our world. How workers have experienced alienation and non
alienation to their work, and enjoys their everyday work as Rosie does
as doing waitress in Blue Collar Brilliance and the Mike Lefevre's life
which most importantly is how they becomes foreigners to the world, to
their families. This is the biggest problem: We have been losing
our humanity because of alienation. Unfortunately, almost everybody got
accustomed to be mechanic. So, these two chapters have some similarities and contrast
of separation from work and their families.
Hi Urgen - The first thing we want to look at is your first paragraph. How much of this is a direct citation? You need to make that absolutely clear: what are Marx's words and what are yours.
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