Essay
2, draft 1
Dayana
Astudillo
In our field work, many employers
treat people different according to their gender. Also many people think that
men do the hard work and women do the easy work however, nobody thinks that
women do double work than men because the woman also does work inside of their
homes such as, cooking, take care of their children, and cleaning. Nowadays,
woman and man work and both bring money to their homes unlike years ago that
was a stereotype in which the man worked and the woman stayed in their homes taking
care of their children and doing the housework or was a case in which the women
was not treated equally or in many cases women did not achieve a recognition in
their jobs.
In
one of the articles named “The Politics of Housework” by Pat Mainardi of
Redstocking talks about equality is a key term in actual relationships. According
with Path Mainardi of Redstocking “We both had careers, both had to work a
couple of days a week to earn enough to live on, so why shouldn’t we share the
housework?” (Mainardi, 1). By that he is stating that in the actuality many couples
have the same style of life like working the same hours, sharing the bills to
pay and even and many cases the same income. But, the only difference that they
have is they gender feminine and masculine and for that reason I think that even
at home the household should be also share equally. But in many cases a
stereotype still lives in our culture because women should do the housework and
take care of kids. However, this happened many years ago with our grandparents.
There are strange cases in which many families this matter still occurred with
the differences that the woman also have a part time job besides the housework.
On
the other one the article named “A Day Without Care” by Sarah Jaffe mentions that
nowadays the majority of woman are discriminated. Although men and women have
the same kind of job many companies tend to pay women less than man just
because they think that always the man should support their family. According to
the article, “in the 1900’s pushed poor women into low-wage part time jobs that
neither paid them enough to support their families nor provided benefits” (Jaffe,
3). For this reason is clear to see that back then they did not have many opportunities
to support their families by themselves nor the support of the man was need it.
The situation was even worse when single mothers need it the full time jobs and
also extra money for baby sister their kids as is stated in the following
comment in the article, “Single mothers who work low-wage… and waste money on complicated
child care arrangement – because they never know whether they’ll be schedule
for five or twenty five hours… if they have to worry about child care” (Jaffe, 3).
Good start. Here are a couple things to work on:
ReplyDelete- Introduce your texts in the first paragraph to make your claim more specific.
- At the end of your second paragraph you say that this all happened a long time ago and now it's all different. But in the next one you say that according to Jaffe, gender discrimination on the job is everywhere today. How do these two points fit together?